Wednesday, February 25, 2009

But I Do

[Okay, if you follow my blog you know I already posted this poem there back on Valentine's Day. Since it was started on a Thursday night during the time we were supposed to be having an Altoids meeting, and because Kim inspired me with her belated Valentine's poem, I'm reposting it here. Interestingly, its theme isn't too far off from that of Kim's poem.]

With words, sweet words — the currency of the day —
He tells how you’ve won his heart.
Giving roses, dozen roses — Earth’s love letters loaned —
He says he’ll always, ever be true.

And maybe,
By the swoons, the gasps, the thrills,
It’s justified.
The symbols are so sweet because of
What they signify.

But allow me to observe a few pertinent facts:
All but the mute can speak words of love to you.
‘most anyone with arms can place blossoms in your hands.
But is it not much easier to say than to be true?
How soon will his love’s flower falter
In the heat of life’s demands?

Ah, but not every guy,
In his heart of hearts,
Adores, loves, worships,
Thinks on, hopes for, dreams of,
Leads, follows, stands side by side with
You.

No, it isn’t every man that
Lives his life for you.
But I do.
I do.

4 comments:

Stephen Stacey said...
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Kimberly said...

I like your emphasis on doing, not just saying. It reminds me of the song, "Show Me" in My Fair Lady. So often we talk about our affections, but how often do our actions actually match up with what we say?

Chris said...

My favorite line is "earth's love letters loaned"

Dianey Face said...

Um, this is pretty incredible. Just sayin'.